Music Video Rough Cut 1 & Feedback

The feedback that we recieved for this rough cut was mainly to complete the music video as this draft is still missin key points in our narrative that are essential for our storyline. Following on from this constructive criticism was that we needeed to make our narrative more clear to the audience as a viewer isnt able to understand the plot in the current state that the rough cut is in. This all links togetehr as the scenes that we still need to film and edit are key points in the music video which really help to deliver the message to the audeince. For example, there are going to be scenes which are going to be filmed in the artist's bedroom where he looks back at old photos of his brother and there will be a shot where him and his brother are sitting on the bed and his brother dissapers in the next shot. This scene will really help the audience to gather what has happened i the opening 20 seconds of our music video where the brothers are involved in a cr crash and the artist's brother dies. As well as this, later on in the video the artist visits various locations him and his brother used to visit, this concept will become more clear when we finsih filming the bedroom scene and oher key areas of filming. On the other hand, we recieved good feedback on the scene shot down by the sea which was one of our most successful times filming as we were able to get a lot of footage that we were able to use.